Saturday, March 12, 2011
In the poem Hubris at Zunzal, by Rodney Jones, he argues that there is "no image like literature". Jones thinks literature needs to be descriptive and should paint a picture for the audience. In the second and third stanza he portrays himself in the water at a beach as if he was stranded on an island. And then in the fourth stanza he stops and realizes his idea is not finished, as if to say "you may be finished with reading that sentence, but I am still here on the island". He says in the first line "then the idea I was not yet finished". Rodney Jones makes us question whether he can express what he is feeling, doing, and seeing and have us comprehend what he is going through.
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This moves too fast. You rush by your points --- the reader feels as if you are counting down your essay. In the second, the third, the fourth stanzas ... How can you better take the reader to the moment of the rejection?
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Jones confides that the reader is liberated from the text in a way he cannot be. He empties his sweet, alcoholic drink on the waves and immediately regrets his decision. This is because, he confesses, he belatedly realizes "then the idea I was not yet finished." What he wants to finish his idea and the drink is emblematic of the pleasure that such imaginative thinking gives him. ...
or something like that. Anyway, the point is to bring the reader to the moment of rejection. Recreate it.