Sample H and G

H
Moves
1. Great detail background information on ipod
2. Wording
3. Made me think of the ipod as "personal media"
4. I was well informed about the ipod
5. Described the ipod well: Simplicity, pocket sized, hipness, personal media
Unmoved
1. There was no argument
2. Just told me what the ipod can do
3. Boring
4. Not personal
5. Felt like I was being sold an ipod
6. Talk to much about the product itself and not the effect on society

G
Moved
1.Great vocabulary and wording
2. The sarcasm (1st page, second paragraph, last sentence)
3. Gave me new information about American society and a reason why many people drink red bull
4. well thought out/ organized
5. Showed different sources like Facebook
6. Personal made it more appealing
Unmoved
1. Some repetition
2. Shouldn't have waited till the last paragraph to bring up the argument how Red Bull is good for you when energy drinks have a bad rap
3. A few mistakes with the typing